Week 4: Evolving Audiences Activity
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Hi! Welcome back to this week challenge.
About: On this challenge, I am going to enhance my story telling task last week a bit to make it analytically engage the audience.
Here is the link: https://mypracticalone.home.blog/2020/03/21/week-3-challenge-story-telling-beated/.
Evaluation enhances:
Elaboration:
The fact is that redundant food really easy to be wiped off by using water. I would like to add a few cinematic effects to the preparation step (wearing the globe, taking the sponge, open the tap, some face close up scene to show some determined espressions… LOL ).
Moreover, putting a plenty of dramatic actions of finding the product like a true adventurer might bring the value of the product, the desire a higher stage. The main point is to emphasize the function of the product.
Synthesis:
- I want a dishwasher that is nature, so I will run to the garden of lemon trees.
- The product is harmless to hand, so I wash the dishes without globe.
- The product is strong, cheap and much in capacity, there will be a scene that I accidentally drop the bottle and broke it. The liquid is dropping all the way back home and when I look back the street is purified, white and clean, and sunshine haha
- ALL these ideas will help the audience understand the big Idea that this product well-qualified.
Target audience
- Middle-age people, university student, family, households
- Product related: household equipment, clothes, kitchen
- Income: average
- They want a product that is cheap, qualify, and safe
SMP-SINGLE MINDED PREPROSITION
The product will satisfy all the customers’ need in dish washing including hand safety, easy to use, normal smell, cheap, etc.
“It’s all you need.” Simple SMP will plays a good role in create trust sometimes.
Re-write:
Start:
A leisured man is living in a house with his sister, after finishing his delicious meal that keeps him away from starving because of the Corona sh!t. The guy finally figures out the mission of his life that will take away all of his masculine, mighty and especially he will be kicked out of the house. CLEAN THOSE BOWLS.
Middle:
The man immediately wears a glove, takes the sponge and open the tap with the eyes of fire and full of determined to make his destiny done( clean those silly bowls). However, thirty minutes pass over, the guy uses all of his bulky muscle to wipe the bowls. There is nothing change, the bowls still there, the dirt still sticking on the bowls with a cheeky smile to ear.
The man is powerless on cleaning and thinking about why, after all, his effort means nothing. “There might be something missing.” he thinks. He must deal with the bowls, the dirt before his sister comes home.
Suddenly, he rushes out of his house, running around to look for the “Thing”, there is a wall. Still, nothing can stop him now. He climbs the wall without minding about who is Newton, get over the wall quickly.
“A garden! There is a garden; it’s a lemon garden”. Everything he needs is under a lemon tree, lying there, shining. The guy grabs all and turn back home.
But unfortunately, he drops the dishwasher bottle to the ground, he picks it up and thinks there is nothing wrong with the bottle. He doesn’t mind that the liquid is dripping off all the way back home. It’s a long venture, but the bottle still fat and full. He turns around and surprisingly sees the way he went on is shining, bright and incredibly clean, “This thing is so powerful!”.
End:
Everything seems to be easy now. The only thing left he has to do is drop the liquid to the bowls, and all the stubborn silly dirt will be gone. He checks the bottle one last time to see if it is made from Australia, he needs it for his next assignment of Bob.
“Well, consider it done,” he said. His sister opens the door and surprise with all the thing he has done, she hugs him, and say:” you did it so well, so it’s your house job from now, you will clean all the dishes for everybody in the house…And one more thing, the toilet as well.”
They live happily ever since.
HalfaboutThien 